Dionysus What do you say to Dionysus?
Arlie_B "Dionysus, I need your help on a project. I'm trying to write this song, but I'm having trouble."
Dionysus He asks about the song.
Arlie_B he gets composition help. "I came up with the idea after meeting Avery's dad. The basic premise is that two people are boasting about how they are better,"
Arlie_B "Two singers, these lyrics aren't at all finished,"
- Dionysus helps as best he can, giving pointers, especially helping with the melody.
Dionysus He suggests Jack to help with the lyrics
Arlie_B "And I figured it would wrap up with an improv section, one person in the band against another."
Dionysus "Definitely a good spot for you & Jack, then, & Magnum."
Dionysus "Arsul, too, though his will be more subtle, I think."
Arlie_B "Right, thanks. I'm absolutely bollocks at this."
Arlie_B etc. I think we can abstract.
Dionysus He laughs, "it's not bad so far. Don't compare your own writing to, say, Jack's or Sue's. They've been at it longer, forone thing, & besides, everyone has their own style. Yours is boisterous, so stick with Jack on that. He's more attuned to it."