Billy: I took a lot of liberties with part 13. We may have to work that one through on IM sometime.

However, I'm getting my my wisdom teeth out tomorrow morning, so I may not post for a few days. I'm not done, I've just got a lot going on. I'll try to squeeze off one more today, but I make no guarantees.

Nothing seems to be off to me. I made a few edits on both new ones. If you're wondering why I changed "obsidian" to "sable," it's for setting reasons--"sable" is the word associated with Darkness, "obsidian" with Destruction. You can change it back if you think "obsidian" still better fits the ship.

Nah, I'll totally go with it. Out of commission today, maybe tomorrow as well. Wisdom tooth surgery was just fine. Aftermath of wisdom tooth surgery sucks ASS.